在日常的學習、工作、生活中，肯定對各類范文都很熟悉吧。范文書寫有哪些要求呢？我們怎樣才能寫好一篇范文呢？以下是我為大家搜集的優(yōu)質(zhì)范文，僅供參考，一起來看看吧
中考短文改錯專練篇一
（一）i am interested at swimming very first, i went swimming just to keep my dream was to swim for my country in the practicing in the pool is very bored, but i still work very hard in order to realize my e my hard work, i have already come first in much important the competitions, i’ve made lot of friends and we’re very ’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改錯
（二）one day, little tony went to a shopping center with his was very saw a toy on a shop liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were was scared and begun to cry.a woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a minutes saw said,” how nice to see you again!dad and i were terrible worried.” tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改錯
（三）last summer vacation, i went on a school trip with mine visited a farm in a took a bus for a while, and then we walked saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the farmers were worked hard in the farm when we of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful was really interesting and at the same time, i learned a lot about an excited school trip!
（四）i’ve been playing baseball for six year and i’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball strict coach wants us do our best when we are it’s not always about also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.i take advice he gives me and bring them to my people say girls can’t play that doesn’t get me d, it makes me play more harder.i want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!
（五）my uncle drove his car meet his he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the opened his eye and answered, “half past eight.” with a “thank you!” a woman a short while this happened my uncle wrote “i don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.a few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “hi, young man.i can tell you that time it ’s nine o’clock now.”
（六）when i began my senior high school years, i had difficulty to learning english.i dared not speak english in the public because of my poor pronounce.i could not get high marks, but i always used bad of be laughed at, i never put up my hand answer questions in my english teacher miss li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my her help, i became interest in english and finally got high li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改錯
（七）dear tim, how time flies!it has been a month since you go to is everything going? next weekend i will take part in a national english speaking competition to be holding in will be a good chance to improve your english and make friends with students from other part of right now i’m not sure that i can remember all the words for a , i will hope i can get a good result.i am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time , li hua
（八）as a service dog, sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition i condition can be something bad happen, sandy will tell my parents course, i help take care of sandy, too.i feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere i i don’t bring sandy to me, he will get he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and i went to the was upset in the whole never stopped look for i got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.i love his dog very much.4
中考短文改錯專練篇二
短文改錯
高考英語短文改錯題要求考生判斷一篇短文中十行(自1995年以來)文字是否有錯，如果有錯誤就將其改正。
此題型旨在測試考生發(fā)現(xiàn)、判斷并改正短文中錯誤的能力，以及考查考生準確運用詞法、句法、行文邏輯等的綜合能力。
本題型側重考查考生的詞匯和語法基礎知識，但并不是單純的知識檢測，而是考查考生在閱讀的過程中運用語法知識解決實際問題的能力。
縱觀近幾年高考短文改錯，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)其設題方式比較固定：正確為1個，多詞或缺詞共計3個，錯詞為6個，其比例為1：3:6。
下面引用近幾年的高考題來分析一下此題的三種錯誤類型：多詞、缺詞和錯詞。
一、多詞
1.多冠詞
(l)suddenly,i caught a sight of my english teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可數(shù)名詞，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意為“看見”。
(2)for e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am為不可數(shù)名詞，泛指時前面不用冠詞。
【知識拓寬】
(1)不可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時不用冠詞。
modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and?
(2)與by連用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名詞前不用冠詞。
by bike騎自行車，by sea由海路，乘船
(3)有些名詞(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)與相應介詞連用，表示進行和這些詞直接相關的活動時，前不用冠詞。
___ _去上學，_______坐牢，_______在吃飯
(4)球類運動、棋類游戲前，不用冠詞。
___ _打籃球，_______下棋
(5)mo。t副詞作“非?！苯鈺r，前面不用定冠詞the。
she is most pretty.她非常漂亮。
(6)?；騮hough引導讓步狀語從句，構成倒裝結構，前置的單數(shù)名詞前不用任何冠詞。
child as he is,he knows a lot.雖然他只是孩子，知道的卻很多。
2.多介詞
(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit china in next yeal
(2)we practice for three times every week..(3)so l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作時間狀語的名詞短語前多了介詞。
(4)?but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意為“談到??”，是及物動詞短語，后須接介詞賓語，但根據(jù)本句語境，此處不必接賓語，故去掉about。
【知識拓寬】
(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名詞詞組直接充當時間狀語，前面不用介詞。
(2)有些動詞在漢語中是不及物動詞，在英語中卻是及物動詞，由于受漢語影響，可能多一個介詞。
serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with tom in amatch(畫線介詞多余)
(3)有些表示地點的副詞，其意義中已包含to，如果再加to，則多余。
on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(畫線介詞均多余)
(4)有些副詞或介詞詞組后加另一個介詞，構成復合介詞，若后面沒有介詞賓語，介詞則多余。同樣，有些動詞短語是“動詞十介詞”結構，若后面沒有介詞賓語，介詞則多余。
①if you won’t go，i'll go instead of.(畫線介詞多余)
②she listened to but heard nothing(畫線介詞多余)
(5)有些動詞或形容詞后接名詞或代詞時，須加一個介詞，但接從句時，必須去掉介詞。
①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(畫線介詞多余)
②i am sorry for that he won't come(畫線介詞多余)
3.詞義重疊
(1)whenever i see them l will often think of myenglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them這一時間狀語從句后再用often顯得重復，應去掉。
(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意為“整個周末”，再加上all，詞義重疊。
【知識拓寬】
(1)有些詞受漢語影響，多一副詞或介詞，造成詞義重疊。
return back回來，repeat again重復，flee away逃走，enter into進入，blue color藍色，stop down停下來，raiseup舉起來，unpack open打開
(2)定語從句中的一個名詞，已由關系代詞取代，再用其替代詞是多余的。
i do remember you having apologized to the old lady imet her last week
(3)單音節(jié)的形容詞或副詞比較等級加-er.-est，多音節(jié)加more、most，但二者不能同時重疊使用。
as a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出現(xiàn)冗言現(xiàn)象
(l)today l visited the smiths-my first time visit toan american family.【解析】本句中的first修飾visit，visit此處為名詞，意為“我的第一次訪問”，time多余。
(2)now i can't watch much television,but?【解析】根據(jù)上下文，此處應是“我根本不能看電視”，因此受漢語影響，多了much，造成冗言。
【知識拓寬】
(1)狀語從句與主句之間多一并列連詞。
①though he tried his best, but he failed.②the more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充當狀語的介詞短語與主句之間多一關系代詞或關系副詞。
①in the last five years that they have climbed churches一②?in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充當狀語的分詞與主句之間多一并列連詞。
sitting down,and he began to work.(4)從屬連詞后多一個that。
she was absent from the meeting because that she was ill(5)復合賓語前多一個that。
i found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多詞
(1)i was used to watch it every night.【解析】此處屬于used to do與be used to兩個固定搭配的誤用，應去掉was，取“過去常常”之意。
(2)?in any other words,iam only a child.【解析lin other words為固定搭配，意為“換句話說”，而any other意為“任何別的??”，與本文上下文不符。
6.行文邏輯上多詞first, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是剛開始向別人講述自己的故事，故只能說something，而不能加more。
二、缺詞
1.名詞前缺限定詞
(1)each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the 【解析】此處應加上the，特指“球隊的隊長”。
(2)the day before the speech contest^englishteacher talked to 【解析】根據(jù)上下文分析，此處english teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英語老師，故加上my，表達一個更確切的概念。
(3)i'1i take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish rful time為固定搭配，意為“祝某人玩得愉快”。
【知識拓寬】
(1)在“so+形容詞十可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)”結構中，名詞前不能缺a或an。
this is so good a book that we will buy it.=this is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定時，前面不能缺a，意為“一些”。
如a little water，但是“每隔幾分鐘”應說成every fewminutesa
(3)有些不可數(shù)名詞(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一種”“一個“一份”時，應加上a或an。
work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏復數(shù)”表示一家人時，the不能省。
the browns like to go skating.(5)表示“兩者之中比較??的一個”時，比較級前應加the。
he is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可數(shù)名詞不可單獨使用，前面應有限定詞，如his,that,tom's,the,a等。
when we walked to the car, bill smiled and shook^2.缺動詞不定式符號to(1)i'd like very much^come but i have anexamination on monday 【解析】like后面不能直接加動詞，需加to，構成固定搭配“would like to do”，意為“想做??”。
(2) will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的狀語，不定式符號to不可省。
【知識拓寬】
(1)不定式作后置定語，不定式符號to不能省。
but then there are always more mysteriesalook into:_____to
(2)-般說來，兩個實義動詞不能并列使用，中間常用to連接。
①7ihe world health()rganization and other organizationsare workingaimprove health all over the world_____to
②i had always wanteda retum to the village _____to
(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等動詞變成被動結構時，充當主語補足語的不定式不能省去to。
little tom was made to do heavy work
(4)為了避免重復前面的動詞，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符號to。
we wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to
3.缺系動詞
(l)neya eager to imow everything about china：.'were【解析】eager為形容詞，必須加系動詞構成系表結構。
(2)what^ your favourite sport?is【解析】本句缺謂語動詞，應加is。
(3)i'd like to^ your pen-friend, /become【解析】本句考查i'd like to do結構，根據(jù)上下文，必須加上系動詞。
【知識拓寬】
(1)由于受漢語語法規(guī)則的影響，有些形容詞作表語時，常常缺少系動詞。
she is afraid of her boss.(2)在被動結構中，由于缺少助動詞，變成了主動語態(tài)，造成錯誤。
?and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick 4.缺介詞(l)we must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of為固定短語，意為“而非，而不是”，后接賓語。
(2)?but the others spent a lota time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定習語，意為“許多，大量”，后加賓語。
【知識拓寬】
改錯題對介詞的考查，重點是一些固定搭配，再如：
wheni have free timei go^along walk..for，因此，同學們在學習和復習中應牢記一些固定搭配。
5.缺連詞in one class,l learned^ it 【解析】本句因缺連詞而造成句子成分殘缺，只有加上why，句子的意義才完整。
【知識拓寬】
(1)在漢語中，分句與分句之間往往不用連詞，但在英語中卻不行。
it began to rain,^ they had to stop
(2)受母語影響，幾個同類詞并列連用時，它們之間往往缺一連詞。
cdi told mother, father, sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time i ②he looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引導的主語從句置于句首時，that常常不能省。
that light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引導同位語從句的連詞that，when等常不可省。
(dthe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短語中，第二個連詞不能少。
he walks as if/though he were drunk
三、錯詞
1.可數(shù)名詞單復數(shù)誤用
(l)they were eager to know everything about chinaand asked me lots of question
(2)we study quite a few subject, such as maths,chinese, english and physics.(3)we practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on tv together.(4)she said that she and my schoolmate' me success,.(5)?so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___
(6)?and many happy return of the day_____
(7)i used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知識拓寬】
對名詞單復數(shù)的考查是高考的熱點之一，幾乎每年考查一處。因此，為了對名詞錯誤判斷準確，應該：
(1)弄清名詞是可數(shù)名詞還是不可數(shù)名詞。
we stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water
(2)掌握好可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)的變化規(guī)則。
there are branch library in many villages libraries
(3)要熟練運用名詞的所有格。
2.時態(tài)誤用
(l)we havea good tinte talking and laughing
(2)i learn about you from my english teacher, d
(3)i was a member of our school football team am
(4)i arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was
(5)i remembered her words and calm down calmed
(6)they did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知識拓寬】
動詞時態(tài)是短文改錯考查的熱點之一，一般說來每年考查一處，而且近幾年高考主要考查現(xiàn)在時與過去時的使用，再如：i had an examination on monday
3.非謂語動詞誤用
(l)it was very kind of them to meet the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive
(2)i look forward to hear from you soon hearing
(3)play football not only makes us grow up...playing
(4)i was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch tv demands very little ng【知識拓寬】
(1)由以上考例可見，v.-mg形式作主語、賓語或狀語是考查的熱點。
cdi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor ing②after learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to ng
(2)過去分詞與現(xiàn)在分詞的區(qū)別是另一考查熱點。此時重點要看分詞與主語或邏輯主語的關系。
①after an hour or so, we began to feel ened②?but now l am interesting in sted(3)被動語態(tài)中的過去分詞誤用成動詞原形。
books may be keep for four (4)掌握好動詞不定式帶to與不帶to的差異。
(5)有些動詞后接不定式，有些動詞后接動名詞，應分別牢記這些動詞。
4.主謂不一致
(1)playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and
(2)now my picture and the prize is hanging in 【知識拓寬】
(1)謂語動詞的單復數(shù)一般取決于前面主語的單復數(shù)。
anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow
(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，..-等并列連詞連接兩個主語時，謂語動詞的單復數(shù)應采取就近一致原則。
(3)there be結構中，謂語動詞也應采取就近一致原則。
but then there is always more mysteries to look
(4)注意把集合名詞(如family，class，team等)和不定代詞(如all，none等)放在具體語境中，判斷其謂語動詞的單復數(shù)。
5.代詞不一致
(l)the smiths did his best to make me feel at
(2)and they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the (3)now someone at home reads ne/everybody【知識拓寬】
(1)根據(jù)上下文判斷，出現(xiàn)了代詞不一致。
①1 felt that it helped me understand how the ②they have been to europe many timeswe
(2)傾向于考查學生對不定代詞、形容詞性物主代詞、名詞性物主代詞以及代詞的主格與賓格等諸方面知識的掌握與運用能力。
and i can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me
(3)人稱代詞性別上的誤用也是常見的錯誤形式之一。
6.連詞誤用
(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thati would win or notwhether【解析】it為形式主語，whether l would win or not是真正的主語，意為“我是否能贏”。
(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor 【解析】句意為：看起來我的父母親把我當成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者為選擇關系而非并列關系，故將and改為or。
(3)it is a very important exam buti can't afford tofail /so【解析】此處應是并列或因果關系，而非轉折關系。
【知識拓寬】
(1)正確掌握各連詞的含義及其在從句中的應用。
①?because i felt that they helped me understandwhat the world ②most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if
(2)熟練應用表示并列、選擇、轉折、因果等關系的連詞：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①she was smiling but nodding at ②therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter r
(3)弄清whether和if的含義及用法區(qū)別。
?and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to
7.關系代詞與關系副詞誤用
i live inbeijing,where is the capital of 【解析】此處是非限制性定語從句，關系代詞which作主語。
【知識拓寬】
(1)正確區(qū)分關系代詞之間的區(qū)別，尤其是that和which的區(qū)別。
?in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be
(2)正確區(qū)分關系代詞與關系副詞的區(qū)別，并掌握它們的用法。
however,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter
8.詞性誤用
(1)also the sport teaches us the important ance【解析】本句應該用名詞importance作動詞teach的直接賓語。
(2)unfortunate, there are too many people in unately【解析】此處應該用副詞unfortunately作狀語，意為“不幸的是”。
(3)after learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to cal【解析】。eem為系動詞，后面應接形容詞作表語。
【知識拓寬】
詞性誤用指的是動詞與名詞混淆，副詞與形容詞混淆等。這就要求我們在平時學習中重視詞性及各類詞在句中的基本功能。再如：
i'm sure we'iihave 8 wonderfully time ful
9.限定詞誤用
(1)today i visited the smiths-my first visit to aamerican 【解析】american為元音音素開頭的單詞，故應用部定冠詞 an
(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，?the【解析】same意為“同樣的”，前面應加定冠詞the。
10.近義詞混用they did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family側重指“家庭這個結構或家里的人。，而home則側重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”應用athome。
【知識拓寬】
在英語中，有許多同義詞、近義詞和反義詞，在平時學習中應抓好基礎，牢記每一個詞的基本含義。再如：.uncle ben will alsogo back for 總之，平時學習中應加強對基礎知識的積累，熟練掌握高考詞匯、基本詞法、句法，同時還應加強閱讀能力的訓練。因為，較快的閱讀速度、較好的語感和牢固的基礎知識是做好短文改錯的重要前提。平時訓練短文改錯時，不應只是為了做題而做題，而應善于總結、摸索答題的規(guī)律。
參考答案
一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess
三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes
中考短文改錯專練篇三
mei was a very famous pop singer in hong er her mother, she began to perform in the age of the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first song “bad girl” made her following years see play in many movies and made many of her songs very was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good sars hit hong kong in 2004, they zed several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on hong people to bravely face the , anita died of cancer december, brave and the beautiful lady will always be ered by joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． but after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, man wrote to him, “dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as i have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” after he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．
day john goes to work by always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ the report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ he got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ his boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ the first day when i went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for i am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the ordering two french dishes and some food, 79．___________ i began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ ile, i looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.i wrote something improper down 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.i looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!i realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was i wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less were 77． play together happily all daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she a way it 79．
is like having two children in the of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． he always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wife is also happy because of 84． i have given up dog doesn’t like the smell.85．
6.i went shopping with my have a lot of things to 1._________ buy drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the hour late, we came back 3._________ to the it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the we asked policeman for was 5._________ glad to help us.a few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“how are 7._________ you doing with my car ” we were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the you think we did then 9._________ we had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the it is too you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ r, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good you can see every 83.______ coin has two 'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______
worried, i have accepted your letter and i'm glad to give you some 76.__________ in all, don't be students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several , 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence , 80.__________ read as much as are many things can't be 81.__________ must see it in books many you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly , in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read y, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good luck for you in your cousin and i usually stay out late with some friends on saturday evenings, left grandpa alone at home.71.___ it was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in second world fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be and then we asked grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ is known to all that the internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ on it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our r, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ ---and ---saw ---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she t—concerts ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really 改為 train 77.去掉 piece。 改為 passes。ant 前加 an 改為 so。81.此行無錯。 改為 waited。 改為 late。 改為 with。ance 改為 important。
--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 84 waiting ⑸ 76．there改為where 77．a(chǎn)lone改為lonely 78．days改為day 79．used改為used to 80．a(chǎn)ll改為both 81．but改為and 82．easy改為easier 83．無錯 84．去掉of 85．smoke改為smoking 改為had 去掉 改為later 4.正確 后加a 改為 minutes 改為what sing改為surprised 后加do 改為 say —in —travelin9 tably--comfortable --if --safe 81.正確 —is 后加not 84.去掉to --and ⑻ed→received →of ulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.對 后加that →them →so 84.去掉to →to
-leaving -neither -freezing -stayed 后面加the -but/yet 去掉 -which -on ⑽ →it →in →and ⌒much as r →besides 82.∨ →kinds ng →watch →leaving
⑾ ed→received 77.去掉more, e后加of, →another →said →or兩,三天用two or three →soon fast指動作的迅速,soon指時間“盡快地”.84.√ y→happy
⑿ 76.√→are →feel ore→however 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to →playing →as →grades“分數(shù)”, →in
⒀ →had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him ers →shoulder → taken 后加 not →i n后加to ⒁ g—called —or ——died 6.√—both 8.去掉not 前加a —dance
中考短文改錯專練篇四
短文改錯專練：march 29th, dear diary, i’m writing this at my ’s almost midnight and i have to getting up early tomorrow, but i can’t sleep.i’m thinking about my future!every day, my parents asks me, “what do you want to be when you grow?” the problem is: i don’t know!my mom always says, “be a doctor!” and she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of i’m really bad at biology at the dad says, “be a pilot!” is he crazy? he knew i hate flying!
now i’m getting tiring, so i’m going to bed.i can think about my future in bed.i get my best ideas when i’m lain down.i have known my friend rebecca for a long firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so i invited rebecca over to my listened to the music together and soon became best years ago, rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with is spent three wonderful weeks in a little a and i loved walking along the beautifully took a lot of photos and had a lot of year, rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each joe, how are you? thanks to your post — good to know when you’re ok.i’ve got news too.i’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and anna, a friend from ’re going to stay on a farm with four days!we’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.i’m sure i’ll love know how crazy i am about the animals!i want to learn all about the cows or the horses.i hope i will have some times to go walking in the hills, , right now i’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!i’ll write to you when i get back to telling you about my , 4 nadia people had always been interested in interest may have begun with the honey what bees the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made admired the way bees seemed to working so languages even developed expressions about people working like english, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.now scientists has a new reason to be interested in have discovered that bees able to communicate with each ch has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many day afternoon, i took the no.6 bus to go was crowded on the bus, and i had listened to music by my ly i saw the name of the bus stop that i should get off, so i got off the bus in i arrived home, i realized that i had left my bag on the id card and ten books were in the bag.i was worried and eager to finding it, so i went to the bus companies for ate, at the lost and found, i see my bag.i wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his a good man!
i read an interested piece of news on a newspaper ing to professor richard wiseman, only less than a quarter of the british achieved their new year goals because they do it in the wrong studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of new year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” the reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking weekends, i went shopping by was a sunny day and i feel very i had bought anything i needed, i went to the bus stop to take a unately, there were too much people at the bus it was my turn to get on, there was no room.i had to wait the next ly, it started to rain.i had no choice but to call a way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.i was filled with angry when i saw an emptier bus go y, i decided to walk home in a an unlucky day!
my name is li hua and i wanted to be class monitor.i am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.i enjoy serving onally, i have vary interests.i love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.i am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.i am confident that i can do the job a student myself, firstly, i will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their those students who is falling behind, i will find ways to help them to catch ly, i will serve as a bridge among teachers and y, i will arrange parties so we can relax.i believe i am the right person to this sarah, i’m writing because i want to apologize to what i did last week.i’m really sorry.i know we said 8:30, and i would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.i was late because my watch broke and i didn’t know what the time it you see, i would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t i have to walk because i’d missed the b then i fell over and my trousers got dirty, so i had to go home and get i decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.i would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile , i hope you aren’t too angrier with to hear you , jack
today my classmate and i went to a farm for a trip.i get up at six o’clock and we set off by the bus, some of us sang, and some of us all had good hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same , we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open y, we went home at half past gh all of us was tired, our trip was really very more my father and mother has been wanting me to study think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an english-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be er, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter er, my good friend, zhang hua doesn’t agree with thought my english is too limited to communicate with s, the cost is too much for his my opinions, i should continue to study in long as i study hard at now, i’ll make great achievements in the ising informs consumers about newer products available on the gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and there is one serious problems with information are actually very often tells us the products’ benefits but hides its ising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same grandfather had had enough of his was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.a week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving decided he will never give her away n, the arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional means they live on much the same way as their ancestors who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the s and beliefs have changed very fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than are passing on with little changes from one generation to the changes do take cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of southwest asia and north uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling by which they saw, they phoned the the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their parts in recreation activities help us keep are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching tv, playing chess, or going to i think we’d better to have more outdoor students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a brains also need changes to make it smart and a word, exercise is good for the sandra, you’ll never guess where i’m writing this email.a cave!you know we’re on holidays in , we spend a few days in barcelona had a good time there, though one day i didn’t feel very good.i think i ate too much ice cream the day , when i left barcelona, we came to spend a few days in r, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!then the hotel owner said, “why don’t try the cave hotels?” we thought he were in caves? but there we are and it’s ’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to ’re never going to have enough time to explore for care!
ben
my uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite decided to set up climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch afternoon they heard lots of shouting they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on ately, the fire was putting turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the mas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to do we think of the other people when we sat down to our christmas dinner? of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we forget to think of the sick and the whole idea of christmas has complete a shame!
a thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on g up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the ore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t ally, my parents returned to and found the thief in our my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a it was too late and she was father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21
nowadays more and more students were found cheating in copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile ng in exams will cause some worse one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the how can cheating in exams be stopped? on my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their jack, i’m glad to learn that you will come beijing to learn about chinese culture as an exchange the moment, i am studying english in my school but i always get better grades in my class.i’m good at the spoken english, so i’m sure i will communicate with you , my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.i believe you will be one of their friend ore, i invite you to live in my home during you stay in beijing.i’m willing to helping you as much as i wishes!
yours, li hua
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