在日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作或生活中，大家總少不了接觸作文或者范文吧，通過文章可以把我們那些零零散散的思想，聚集在一塊。范文書寫有哪些要求呢？我們怎樣才能寫好一篇范文呢？下面我給大家整理了一些優(yōu)秀范文，希望能夠幫助到大家，我們一起來看一看吧。
給老師的英文感謝信篇一
在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定遇到過很多老師，現(xiàn)在請你選擇其中對你幫助最大的一位老師，給他(她)寫一封感謝信，談?wù)勀銓λ?她)的印象，回憶一下他(她)是怎么幫助你的，并表達(dá)你對他(她)的祝福。信的開頭和落款已給出，不計詞數(shù)。
提示詞：kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope
本題要求我們給對自己幫助最大的老師寫一封感謝信，因為是自己親身經(jīng)歷的，又是寫給自己的老師，同學(xué)們一定有千言萬語要對他(她)說。在情真意切的同時，我們還要格外注意文章的詳略和條理。
通過審題，我們可以獲知：
1. 文章的主題：感謝師恩
2. 文章的要點：對老師的感謝之情，對老師的印象，回憶老師的幫助，并表達(dá)祝福。
3. 文章的體裁：書信
4. 文章的人稱：you, i
5. 文章的時態(tài)：因為是回憶，所以以一般過去時為主。
同學(xué)們先把相關(guān)短語和詞匯整理一下：
1. 描寫老師的形容詞有哪些呢?
kind, nice, selfless, patient, easy-going, responsible, be strict with…
2. 有哪些單詞和短語可以表示老師對自己的'幫助呢?
help me with my english/ maths, explain…to me patiently, encourage me never to give up, praise me when i make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when i am ill, tell me some good ways to learn……
接下來，我們看看如何表達(dá)對老師的感謝和祝福吧。
1. i want to say thanks/thank you.
2. i owe my progress/success to your help.
3. i owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for me.
4. i’ll never forget your help and i will remember all the happy times we shared together.
5. i hope you can be happy/healthy, forever.
6. i wish you good luck/health!
dear miss wang:
i’m glad to write to you.
you are such a kind and easy-going teacher that we all like you. i remember that at first i hated learning new english words very much and i even wanted to give up. when you noticed this, you had a talk with me. you told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give up. i’ve made great progress in english and now i’m a top student in english.
i want to say thanks. i will work harder in the future. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.
yours,
linda
點評：
本文信息點齊全，層次比較清楚，語言比較通順，句式也有一定的變化。作者首先用一個so…that 句式將老師隨和、善良的特點勾勒出來，接下來回憶了老師是如何在自己當(dāng)初因討厭背單詞而想放棄學(xué)英語時對自己無私的幫助。結(jié)尾處，對于老師的感謝和祝福也就水到渠成，感情真摯、自然。
當(dāng)然，文章的連貫和語言優(yōu)化方面也還是可以進一步改進的。
dear miss wang,
i’m glad to write to you. at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings.
how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english.
i want to say thanks to you. i will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.
yours
xiaoming
點評：
這篇修改后的作文無論在語言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的。
首先，開頭at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings. 短短的一句話便把作者此時的激動和對老師的感激之情表達(dá)得很充分。第二段首句的設(shè)問句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描寫自己起初對英語單詞的厭煩時，作者用了一個how 所引導(dǎo)的賓語從句替代原文的普通句式。
文章的幾個過渡語也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定程度上增強了文章的連貫性。此外，幾個表達(dá)法也相當(dāng)?shù)氐?、出彩，比如?live up to one’s expectations (不辜負(fù)某人的期望)表示自己的決心，使得整篇文章的感情更加飽滿、真摯，給人留下了深刻的印象。
給老師的英文感謝信篇二
dear teacher:
i’m glad to be your student, and i am very happy to learn the course i like best under your help.
english is an important tool, through which we can share it with the world. i treasure the chance of learning english, and i enjoy the happiness from this course.
this thursday is thanksgiving day. on this special day, i want to express my deepest thanks to you!
yours sincerely,
jane
給老師的英文感謝信篇三
dear teacher:
hello!
pen, full of words like a flood in my heart, dont know where to start. that you give us the deepest impression of your words and deeds left our best memories.
time flies, unconsciously, the teacher you have to accompany the time we spent almost a year, this year, we have to say no to you out of gratitude.
come to the first lesson of the university, is your english class. in our eyes, your kind, no vehemently enforcement. your class, i feel no pressure and tension. not only learning in class, after class, you are also very concerned about to us. whenever we meet with difficulties, you are always thinking about new ways to help us, teach us; when our mood depressed, you will take the initiative to clean our struggle, you have confidence in our future.
although the teacher you often mention their own children in class, in our hearts, you are not only our english teacher, is more like a great mother.
your class, i cant pick out any problem, you use your unique way of teaching to us in every class, both humorous and the coming days, we will be more efforts to study, with the most excellent grades in return for your sweat, return school and the dead silk side, s burn, you the silkworm spirit however we respect, thank you, nds of words, express thanks to you.
finally wish the teacher:
healthy body, a happy family,
happy every day.
your student：
xx年x月x日
給老師的英文感謝信篇四
dear mr li,
i’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. i am now a freshman of wuhan university, which i have been dreaming about. mr li, i still remember the days when you taught me english. my english has been improved greatly because of your creative work. however, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. i was tired of the warning that if i didn’t do my best, i wouldn’t have the chance to go to college.
thanks for your encouragement; if not, i wouldn’t have realized my dream. and now i really understand you. i wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. are you still so busy? how i miss you!
hoping to hear from you soon.
yours,
li hua
給老師的英文感謝信篇五
dear teacher ,
i am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning english and speaking english.
during these days in your class, i have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me. firstly, you let me know what is the west thinking patternstraight thinking pattern. and, i think, it is very important to understand the wests thoughts. as you know, this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. secondly, i have got enough confidence in speaking in english from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. now, i always express my ideas in english as possible as i can. its great to do that. the last not the least, i find that learning english is not an boring thing as before and im interested in studying english which was just a necessary task to pass examinations. reading, listening or speaking all become interesting and i really enjoy it.
above all, i want to say thanks again to you. and thank you for your time.
good luck！
your student：
xx年x月x日
給老師的英文感謝信篇六
dearms. fu,
iwould like you to know that i appreciate the help and support you gave to mewhen i was in junior high school. i enjoyed being taught by you immensely. youare an excellent teacher and inspired me to continue learning with an open andpositive mind.
iwould like to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for teaching me what is responsibility. you helped me how to find the best place for myself and look forthe personal values. i remember you gave me a book as a present of the springfestival. you are the first teacher who gave me a present which i was moved fora long time.
iwould further say that you gave me so good memories that i wish i could go backto that time again. it was you who encouraged me to overcome obstacles. it wasyou who cared about my emotions. i appreciate all you have done for me, whichmeant so much to me. i hope that this letter brings my best wishes to you and ionce again thank you for giving me those precious memories of my life, which ishall cherish forever.
sincerely yours,
yang
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