無論是身處學(xué)校還是步入社會(huì)，大家都嘗試過寫作吧，借助寫作也可以提高我們的語言組織能力。寫范文的時(shí)候需要注意什么呢？有哪些格式需要注意呢？這里我整理了一些優(yōu)秀的范文，希望對大家有所幫助，下面我們就來了解一下吧。
高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇一
=last weekend, we held an meaningful activity named (titled) “technology makes life better ”….
---引出話題，時(shí)間，人物，事件
in the morning, we set off for前往a technology company. an engineer therewelcomed us and gave a lecture on 3dprinting, introducing its history,development and application應(yīng)用in fields/areas領(lǐng)域 like architecture,medicine, education and so he showed us how the 3d printer works. we were amazed at the magic魅力of technology and couldn’t wait to give it a try. our group first designed a 3dmodel of a bike and then operated the printer as instructed. watching the bike gradually taking shape, we felt excited. when all our works were displayed/ shown/exhibitedon the table, we admired/ appreciated them and some took photos to record thisunforgettable experience/ memorable experience.
---參觀過程，細(xì)節(jié)較多，一般過去式。
this is really an educative and eye-opening activity in which/ where i was impressed with the convenience便利 and benefits/ advantages/ strengths brought by technology.=through this activity, we not only broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge, but develop our great passion for science.
高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇二
we have seen some famous movies, such as harry potter and twight, both are hot sell novels. when we see the novels have been put into the screen, it is naturally that we will compare the original one and the adapted one, the latter is always being critical, i prefer to see the novels.
我們都看過了一些著名的電影，比如《哈利波特》和《暮光之城》，這兩部都是熱銷的小說。當(dāng)我們看到小說被放上屏幕的時(shí)候，很自然地，我們會(huì)拿原版和改編的版本來比較，改版的總是受到批評(píng)，我比較喜歡看小說。
the english novels are excellent, the first novel i saw was twight, it is about a vampire named edward and a human girl named bella, they fall in love, but the different identities makes them hard to be together. when i read the story, i was so impressed, bella’s inner voice is so strong that i imagine myself is her. while when i saw the movie, the plot happens so fast, bella’s love is still strong, but for the audience, it is hard for them to understand. the long story is shorten, we have to finish the story in one and a half hour. the quick watch makes the audience hard to perceive the character’s inner world, so the strong feeling is weaker.
英語小說很好看，我看的第一部小說是《暮光之城》，這是關(guān)于一個(gè)叫愛德華的吸血鬼和一個(gè)人類女孩貝拉的故事，他們相愛了，但是身份的不同讓他們很難在一起。當(dāng)我讀到小說時(shí)，我印象很深刻，貝拉內(nèi)心的聲音很強(qiáng)烈以至于我把自己當(dāng)成了她。然而當(dāng)我看到電影時(shí)，情節(jié)進(jìn)行得很快，貝拉的愛依舊強(qiáng)烈，只是對于觀眾來說很難理解。長故事被縮短，我們不得不在一個(gè)半小時(shí)內(nèi)看完。如此快速的觀看讓觀眾難以察覺到人物的內(nèi)心世界，因此強(qiáng)烈的感情被淡化了。
so for me, i like to read novels, i can perceive the character’s emotion and be immerged in the novel world.
所以對于我來說，我喜歡看小說，我可以察覺到人物的感情，融進(jìn)小說的世界。
高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇三
假定你是李華，你的英國筆友peter所在的城市目前疫情比較嚴(yán)重，請你給他寫封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.表示問候;
2.給出防護(hù)建議。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：傳染病epidemic
dear peter,
knowing that the epidemic is getting worse in your city, i’m really worried about you and i’d like to provide you with some preventive measures. first and foremost, you should have proper personal protection, so make sure you wear a mask when going out. secondly, keep a safe distance from others and avoid mass gathering. the last but not the least, you’d better wash your hands frequently to keep clean, and do some exercise to keep fit, thus reducing the chances of getting sick. by following the measures mentioned above, i’m sure you can win the battle against the epidemic.
please let me know if you need any help. i wish you good health.
yours,
li hua
高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇四
假定你是李華。請你給筆友peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：
李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡
航班號(hào)：ca985
到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭語和介紹語已為你寫好。
dear peter,
how are you doing?________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
【參考范文】
dear peter,
how are you doing?
i’m writing to tell you that my uncle li ming is going to your city for a conference, and i’ve asked him to bring you the chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
also, i’d like you to do me a favor. would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the thank you in advance!
his flight number is ca985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. august 6. my uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. and he will be in blue jacket.
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
高考英語作文要想寫的行云流水，那么需要同學(xué)們注意平時(shí)的積累，掌握一些必備的句型，對于提高英語作文的亮點(diǎn)得高分很有幫助哦。
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高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇五
作文題目
假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右;2、參考詞匯：房租―tent(n.).
作品一：
i’m very happy to receive your letter, and i’m glad to hear that you will go to china to learn chinese here. i have already found a fiat for you. it is on fangcao street, which is not far from jianxin chinese school. bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the chinese school. the flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but i’ll try my best to meet your needs. if it is not suitable enough, write to me and i will look for another better place.
hope you will come here soon!
all the best!
yours,
li hua
滿分理由
作品二：
dear bob,
welcome to china! you wrote to me to find a place for you.
i have found an apartment on fangcao street near jianxin chinese school. it is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. the house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
also from this house you can get to your school easily. just take the bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. it is only one stop. at last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? then i’u be able to meet you at the airport,see you.
best wishes !
yours,
li hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。
作品三：
dear bob,
how are you these days?
i’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn chinese. you asked me to find a place for you. now i’ve found one which i think is pretty good. the place is on fang cao street which is near the bus stop. it’s just one stop away from jianxin chinese school.
there are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, i think it is suitable. by the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. i hope you’ll like it. if not, i’ll try to find another place for you.
yours,
li hua
滿分理由
本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。
作品四：
dear bob,
i’m glad to hear from you.
welcome to our city in september. i’ve found a suitable house for you.
the house is on fang cao street, not far from the jianxin chinese school. if you take the bus, it is just one stop.
it is a flat on the third floor of a building. it has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. you can cook yourself. the mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. in the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. the desk is next to the window. it will be good for study. the total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? just let me know. i’ll try my best to help you.
yours,
li hua
滿分理由
本文內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，描述具體細(xì)膩，用詞適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。
高考英語試卷命題意圖 高考英語命題分析篇六
高考英語寫作就要“拽”寫作方法分析
1。高考寫作的實(shí)質(zhì)——變相的考察句型與詞匯的靈活應(yīng)用
英語寫作不同于語文作文的寫作，如果說語文作文是一個(gè)自由發(fā)揮的舞蹈，那么高考英語寫作就是帶著枷鎖在跳舞。我之所以這樣來形容，是因?yàn)楦呖加⒄Z寫作的內(nèi)容都已經(jīng)通過文字、表格、圖片這三種形式給定大家了，內(nèi)容方面，不需要學(xué)生進(jìn)行發(fā)揮，大家所需要發(fā)揮的就是給這個(gè)不變的內(nèi)容不要老去穿毫無變化的校服(簡單句)，而要去穿一些不一樣的衣服，讓它顯得不那么單調(diào)，讓判卷老師能看到不同，而那些所謂的衣服也就是多變句型與詞匯。
2。寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)——怎么去迎合評(píng)卷老師的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分學(xué)生的作文都處在15分左右，寫作滿分25分，15分也就是個(gè)及格分，而很多學(xué)生都是為了提分才來到了，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?這個(gè)問題很容易回答。15分的作文中規(guī)中矩，該對的都對，包括內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的完整，語法與詞形的正確，但是全都是很簡單句子的一個(gè)堆砌，沒有任何的亮點(diǎn)。而20多分的作文句型詞匯方面就做了很好的包裝，它的句子穿的衣服已經(jīng)不是校服，而是李寧、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以讓人覺得很“拽”，而高考英語寫作要的.就是這種很“拽”的感覺。
3. 寫作提分的三要素——句型，連詞，高級(jí)詞匯
句子是我們寫作文最大的單位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的連詞將其連句成段，在加上一些如星星般亮點(diǎn)詞匯的點(diǎn)綴，一篇好的高考英語作文就有了。而這三個(gè)因素中最容易把握的是句子，最難的是高級(jí)詞匯，限于大家的詞匯還比較有限，一篇文章中出現(xiàn)那么一兩個(gè)就夠了。我們應(yīng)該把重心放在句型上，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)最容易把握。
但是大家又有這樣的困惑，學(xué)校里老師也給了我們很多的句型啊，動(dòng)輒成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面對考試的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)背的那些怎么也用不上。其實(shí)不是那些東西沒有用，而是它們太干了，就好比一根干骨頭，大家嚼起來很沒有味，也不知道該把他們往哪里放。
在這里我給大家提供一種比較切實(shí)可行迅速提高的練習(xí)方法，在接下來的時(shí)間里只要大家按照這個(gè)方法來，就一定會(huì)有收獲。找見歷年真題，一周只需要寫兩篇，但是要這么來寫。
1. 把你要寫的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用九到十句的漢語表達(dá)出來。
2 。逐一地進(jìn)行翻譯，不是用簡單句，而是要刻意地去想 。
(1)可以用什么樣的復(fù)雜句。
(2)怎樣去避開不會(huì)的表達(dá)，轉(zhuǎn)義。
例如：
這本書是如此的有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。
1)this book was so interesting that i read it again and again。
2)this was such an interesting book that i read it again and again。
3)this was so interesting a book that i read it again and again。
4)so interesting was this book that i read it again and again。
這四句譯文當(dāng)中無疑評(píng)卷老師最欣賞的是第四句，因?yàn)樗昧说寡b。
再例如：
如果征收門票，需要建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象。 這句話中肯定“收”那個(gè)動(dòng)作很多同學(xué)不會(huì)表達(dá)，那能不能想一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)義的方式，既避開了“收”這個(gè)動(dòng)作還能表達(dá)原句的含義。
a wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesnt help the image of the city。
這個(gè)譯文中用一個(gè)大家很熟悉的經(jīng)典句型there be句型化險(xiǎn)為夷。
4。如何備考
其實(shí)這種思維大家都有，但是沒有成為一種思路，讓它能在考試中起到作用，那是因?yàn)榇蠹揖毜蒙?。英語寫作處在一種很尷尬的境地，一方面大家要分?jǐn)?shù)，但另外一方面大家一個(gè)學(xué)期里寫的作文也就是期中期末的兩篇。毫不夸張地說，有的學(xué)生上了三年的高中可能只寫了六篇作文，所以練習(xí)是很重要的，要是現(xiàn)在不練而把高考當(dāng)練習(xí)，那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那時(shí)你不要罵評(píng)卷老師不公平，而是應(yīng)該問問自己備考的時(shí)候?yàn)槭裁床欢嗑殠灼?，時(shí)間都是擠出來的，希望大家可以擠出時(shí)間來練寫作。
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